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My first site as a free-lancer.

Post by jmestep » Sat Sep 01, 2007 1:11 pm

I'm starting to do some sites from scratch, rather than just modifying.
Here's the first- I'm sick of look in at it by now, so tell me what I've missed. (The product images are from the customer.) We've still got to put some more info on and get payment methods set up and a few links and odds & ends.
http://www.affordablewater.us
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Post by gjaros » Sat Sep 01, 2007 9:08 pm

The site looks pretty nice. One thing I would highly recommend is getting an introductory paragraph or two on the home page. They need a bit of information about who they are and what they do. This should also help with SE rankings. I always tell my clients to imagine they were a visitor that just stumbled upon their site. It should be obvious from the home page what the site is all about.
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Post by jmestep » Sun Sep 02, 2007 6:48 am

Thanks George. I'm waiting on the merchant for the text.
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Post by kens » Thu Sep 06, 2007 8:13 pm

Judy-

I like this look better than the one you were working on before (that had the border prblem) A few issues

1) as you and George pointed out, needs text

2) Maybe it's just me, but I like the "contact us" to be more visible. As it is, you need to go to the help page an find it on a list.

Nice work, makes me thirsty!

Ken

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Post by jmestep » Fri Sep 07, 2007 6:03 am

Thanks for the input. Merchant is waiting on a new phone line and other info to finish that area off. I had set a deadline for myself of Sept 1 and made it! He is still waiting on other things to get accomplished before he can launch.
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